Thank you all for your constructive feedback. I offer up the key revisions below, but please read the doc within the next 24 hours, and I'll send Fri morning barring major changes requested.
As a note, Kofi responded to our 1st letter on 1/15.
Riley
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A bullet point of 'new requests' is found at the bottom of the document which includes:
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-Empty lot across from Donahue
-Door locks
-Bike Racks
-Appliances and deceptive advertising
Additionally, we revamped the heater section. I left the request open ended, due to the variety of problems.
Riley Smith |MA Sustainability, 2010 Cell: 801-380-1073
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