2016年2月4日星期四

Re: Draft Letter to Kofi

Hey all, 

If any of you were curious as to how our HOA is currently and planning to be put to work, I've attached the following document, sent by Natalie. Might be worth a read through before the next board meeting. 

-Sas

On Mon, Feb 1, 2016 at 11:07 AM, Jason <jasonlfried@hotmail.com> wrote:
Hello fellow merchant owners,

A small group of us drafted a response to Kofi letter on items that are not HOA matters.

Please review.  2 sections need more work.  The section on heating could use some more edits since none of us doing first draft have had issues with our heaters so those with issues please let me know if this has been resolved or if not give speficic language to use.  Also the section about the priority across the street from Donahue that Lennar is selling could use some more work as well.  At the HOA meeting it seemed like some very specific legal sounding language was used so if those that know what that should say could finish that section that would be helpful.

So if you can send me any high level issue you see with what is being said.  Also if we have any good editors out there please let me know if you see spelling and grammar edits since that is not my strong suit.

Finally I do want to do get another meeting of just us together but Doddle website seems to be having an issue right now so will send something around looking for a good time sometime soon.

Jason Fried
#411

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